Wednesday, March 18, 2009

I Need You !!!

When the wind blows strong,
When everything seems to go wrong,

I Need You.....

When I want to confide,
When I am unable to hide,

I Need You.....

When there is unbearable pain,
When every effort has gone in vain,

I Need You.....

When I want to cry,
When there is no shoulder to rely,

I Need You.....

When every where its dark,
When life has no spark,

I Need You.....

When In the crowd, I am sitting at the corner seat,
When i need a reason for my heart to beat,

I Need You.....

When I need a inspiration,
When I need a transformation,

I Need You.....

When I need the potion of love,
When I want to fly like a dove,

I Need You.....

I Need You,
It seems weird ,

I Need You.....
because my thoughts are very clear,

I Need You,
for living my life dear,

I Need You,
for as long as I am here.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

WOW....kya baat hai...........Too good.......wots happening 2 u now -a-days.......Thinking 2 much haa.......
well....,wonderfully written & M alys der 4 u......
Superb...no 1 can beat u in dis......

v@RshA B said...

lyf cnt b imagined widout expectations...
hw mch evr v try v cnt escape,sumwer or d other v hv 2 face it..
good thought..

Ashwini murthy said...

hey nice concept n well written..that u always do :D

but this tym I felt ur poetry losses the grip when u started the single line sentences

"I need u"
it seems weird"

hope u dnt feel bad...but in last poem also

"I want o sleep in your lap"
"n u say cut the crap"

I felt this doesnt go wd the peom nature

i am sorry if u feel bad for this comment...but I really see potential in u so thought I could suggest u...Keep writting...waiting for ur nxt blog