When the wind blows strong,
When everything seems to go wrong,
I Need You.....
When I want to confide,
When I am unable to hide,
I Need You.....
When there is unbearable pain,
When every effort has gone in vain,
I Need You.....
When I want to cry,
When there is no shoulder to rely,
I Need You.....
When every where its dark,
When life has no spark,
I Need You.....
When In the crowd, I am sitting at the corner seat,
When i need a reason for my heart to beat,
I Need You.....
When I need a inspiration,
When I need a transformation,
I Need You.....
When I need the potion of love,
When I want to fly like a dove,
I Need You.....
I Need You,
It seems weird ,
I Need You.....
because my thoughts are very clear,
I Need You,
for living my life dear,
I Need You,
for as long as I am here.
I were your child or u were mine??
11 years ago
3 comments:
WOW....kya baat hai...........Too good.......wots happening 2 u now -a-days.......Thinking 2 much haa.......
well....,wonderfully written & M alys der 4 u......
Superb...no 1 can beat u in dis......
lyf cnt b imagined widout expectations...
hw mch evr v try v cnt escape,sumwer or d other v hv 2 face it..
good thought..
hey nice concept n well written..that u always do :D
but this tym I felt ur poetry losses the grip when u started the single line sentences
"I need u"
it seems weird"
hope u dnt feel bad...but in last poem also
"I want o sleep in your lap"
"n u say cut the crap"
I felt this doesnt go wd the peom nature
i am sorry if u feel bad for this comment...but I really see potential in u so thought I could suggest u...Keep writting...waiting for ur nxt blog
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